Wednesday, July 25, 2012

AN ABANDONED MOMENT


At Valley of Flowers
A half open door. An open blue sky.
An unfinished sentence. One last try.

An unkempt garden. Uncut patches of grass.
An unanswered prayer. Sheet of Cracking glass.

A misplaced feeling. One lonely dinner.
Many scars to show. But, still not a winner.

One drop of sorrow. Million drops of rain.
Ruined by Love. An unredeemed pain.

A skeleton of emotions. One dry dead tree.
Lost something precious. In trying to break free.

One flickering candle. A never ending night.
Bit by bit I burn. To show myself the light.

Memories of the past. Tears of today.
The same old smile. Won’t you stay?

An incomplete poem. A melody out of tune.
The moist eyes that waits to see you soon.

That insane courage to read an unread book.
I close my eyes to see your serene lovely look.

An abandoned moment. One simple wish.
Your life of joy, I will lifelong relish.

The horror of silent days. Same noisy strife.
An unfulfilled dream. One complete life.

17 comments:

  1. Dear friend Kunal, your poem is so beautiful and so very sad, the emotion in it is tangible ... I hope that she returns. I dread the horror of silent days and unfulfilled dreams.
    A warm hug
    xoxoxo ♡

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    1. Thanks Dianne. Your words always give me strength and encouragement to write even better. :-)

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  2. Amen to the life of joy for whoever you ae wishing for and FOR YOU Tooo my friend

    beautiful words lovely poem


    Bikram's

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  3. Starstruck by the last two lines. Beautiful! :)

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  4. simply beautiful kunal!...
    the poem had a soul within which communicated its feelings in the most perfect words :-)

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  5. simply beautiful kunal!...
    the poem had a soul within which communicated its feelings in the most perfect words :-)

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  6. Ur poems always leave me with a lot of thoughts. :) Hope u r doing well.

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    1. Yes. I am doing fine Ria. And Thank you. :-)

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  7. This poem had a heartbeat effect to it. The words thumped n spoke at the same time reminiscing every emotion felt,every image that lasted which once gave a smile but now was far from eyes...beautiful rhyme scheme n meaning:)

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