Thursday, August 11, 2011

Koshish


Maine to bas koshish ki thi..
ki agar tumse akhiri baar mil na saka..
to kam se kam..
ek baar tumhare khwabo mein aau..
Pukaru..
Apne hone ka ehsaas karau
Par main kamyaab ho na saka
Jaane kyun..Dil ko phir samjha na saka..
Jaane Kyun, Tumse Aakhri baar mil na saka..
Tumhare khwabo mein jagah pa na saka..


Shayad,
Main  tumhare sapne mein aaya bhi tha..
Mujhe dekh kar..
Tumne apne hothon ke thar tharane ko dabaya bhi tha...
Shayad
Tumne apne dil ki muskaan ko chupaya bhi tha
Meri Manzil,
Sirf khwabo ke daayare mein rahna nahi tha.
Tumhare dil mein bhi utarne ki chahat thi.
Par inkaar ka jo darr
jo hum sab mein hota hai..
Us darr par, main bhi kabu pa na saka..


Jab subah ki roshni ne mere aankhon ko khola..
Tab tumhare darwaaze par aana chaha...
Halki si aawaz deni chahi..
Bina kuch bole hi..
Sab kuch bolna chaha…
Par tumse aankhen mila kar.
Apne zakhm tumhe dikha kar...
Alvida kahne ki himmat,juta na saka...

Jab bataabi itni badh gayi..
Tere paas aane ko..
Meri zindagi ne mujhe chod diya..
Tujhe apna banane ko..
Mere hoth khud hi chalne lage
Tera naam gungunane ko..
Maine daud lagayi..tumhe paane ko..
Tumhe paas la kar..sab kuch batane ko
Par tumhe maine bahut khush paaya..
Kisi aur ke baahon mein..
Tere hothon par thi khushi jo apaar.
Tumhari aakhon mein, uska sapna tha barkarar..
maine apne kadam wahin thaam liye..
ek kadam to kya..apni soch ko bhi aage badha na saka..
Itne paas aa kar bhi tujhe apna dard samjha na saka..
Teri aakhon mein , wo dard, main pa na saka..


Daudte hue...bahut dur nikal aaya tha main.
Parayon ko to kya, apno ko bhi chod aaya tha main
Khuli aakhon se sapna dekhna chod aaya tha main..
Saanse to chal rahi thi..par jindagi bhool aaya tha main.
Par tumhare jaane ke baad, zindagi jeene ki,
Koi aur achhi wajah main dhund na saka..


Main haar gaya..
aisa maine soch liya tha...
tumhe bhool chuka hun..
aisa maine maan liya tha..
Magar teri jhuki palaken meri nazron mein kaid hai..
Teri sanson ki garmi meri sanson mein jabt hai..
Tere hothon ki garmi mere hothon mein band hai...
Pichle dino ko yaad karte hue..
Apne aap ko samjhane ki koshish ki..
par us din..jab tumne mujhe pehli baar chua tha..
us yaad ko, aaj bhi bhula na saka...
Tere dard ko apne dil se mita na saka..

 
Tum mere darwaaza par kabhi aaogi..
Apne dil se, mujhe aawaz lagaogi..
Mera toota hua dil, phir se hansega
Tumhare pyar ki barish mein,
Main phir se bheengunga
Haqeeqat mein aisa hoga..
Iski umeed maine chodi nahi hai..
Tumse jo maine rishta joda tha..
Wo abhi tak maine todi nahi hai..
Mere jeevan mein log to bahut aaye..
Tumhari jagah abhi bhi wahi hai..
Main to phir bhi kuch nahi bolta..
Tujhe yaad kar, dil aaj bhi hai rota.
Tumhari tasveer saamne rakh..
Main aaj bhi..raat bhar nahi sota..
Tumhare bina jeena, abhi tak to main seekh na saka…
Kabhi main tumhara tha..
Iske siwa, apni aur koi pehchan bana na saka..
Jab bhi aakhhen band karta hun..
To yehi sochta hun..
Jaagti aakhon se dekha  ek hi sapna tha..
Vo pura ho na saka, Tumhara ho na saka..

25 comments:

  1. Hopelessly Romantic..

    what wud u like to say abt the tuning now.. ;)

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  2. Jo ho na saka usse zindagi rukti nahi... muskurahat kabhi ghum se chupti nahi...
    aaj nahi to kal ek naya suraj aaega... har pal .. ek naya rang laaega...
    ehsaas aaj bhi hai kal bhi rahega ... par waqt aaj kuch hai kal kuch aur rahega..

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  3. Hmm... Real story? Or imagination? Nice try though.... :)

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  4. hahahahahahaha good stuff :)
    Kosish :p

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  5. hahahahahha good stuff :)
    Kosish tu ki thee :P

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  6. This is one profound poetry!! Lovely!!

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  7. nice...post it in Hindi Devanagari font

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  8. This must be your story...

    Except for the fact that it was too long, it is commendable.

    Following lines are really very well written:
    "Magar teri jhuki palaken meri nazron mein kaid hai.. Teri sanson ki garmi meri sanson mein jabt hai.. Tere hothon ki garmi mere hothon mein band hai... Pichle dino ko yaad karte hue.. Apne aap ko samjhane ki koshish ki.. par us din..jab tumne mujhe pehli baar chua tha.. us yaad ko, aaj bhi bhula na saka... Tere dard ko apne dil se mita na saka..."

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  9. Such writings are among the few that can be read over and over, and with each read you find a new meaning and renewed emotions

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  10. Princess:

    I have nothing to say about the tuning :)
    jaise pehle bola tha..tere ye 4 lines mujhe apni puri poem se jyada achhe lage...

    "khush ho ja" :D

    Psycho:

    Imagination. Definitely,Maybe

    Shama:

    Thodi koshish aage bhi karta rahunga :)

    Yamini:

    Thank you.

    Crazy Devil:

    I thought of doing that, but the lazy me just won this time. Thank you for coming here :)

    Shringar:

    itne bolne ke baad, akhir comment de hi diya tune :)

    To be honest, the first 3 lines of the para which you liked are not entirely mine, but the rest are :)

    Alka:

    Thank you again.

    Kavita:

    Achha hota..ki ye Dil se post mujhe na likhna padta..if you know what I mean.. ;)

    Thank you for the comment.

    Beyond Horizon:

    Overwhelmed :D
    Thank you :P

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  11. main to khush hi hun.. bt that doesn't change the fact that ur poem shows the amount of effort u have put in... 4 lines to koi bhi likh sakta hai bt dil ki baatein is tarah se likhna aasaan nahi..

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  12. I just shared this on my Fb page!
    Your words, yes, they deserved it.

    In one word, "Ati sundar" :)

    Love, Risha :)

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  13. :) So sweet. Was an entire movie! Been a while since i read something so hopelessly romantic.

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  14. I just got to know - this debut of you as a poet is coz of a deep discussion with you & shweta...I am least bothered about the result of your discussion but you really wrote a good poem... Congratulation on introducing of your first poem( i think this would be first ) .... :)

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  15. Wow, another long tiring session of reading but this time in Hindi rather than in English. He he he, Kidding ;-)

    As it is your first poem so I would congratulate you to think through the complete poem without breaking the feel of it. Believe me It is really impossible to keep the essence of such long poems.

    Expert Opinion: U have to learn a lot about playing with the words ;) I am not perfect but I can feel it ;)

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  16. awwww... that was a complete treat for a mush pot like me.. loved it .. please keep writing more of them :P :)

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  17. WOW!
    I love hindi poetry .. haven't come across many over blogs.
    Toooo good! :)

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  18. Waah betaa Wah!!! Chhaa gaye tum...Really a true KOSHISH.

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  19. मेरा तुम्हारा एक अजीब सा नाता है
    जो हर बार टूट कर शीशे की तरह बिखर जाता है

    That's the first thought that came to my mind. Lovely poem :)

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  20. Massive. Intense. Heart-felt. Great work, buddy!

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  21. Princess:
    "...haan...dil ki baatein is tarah se likhna aasaan nahi.." :D

    Risha:

    Thank you :)

    Phoenix:

    Hopelessly Romantic. You are not alone here :)

    Some Unspoken Words:

    Thank you. Glad you liked it :)

    Vikas:

    jaan kar achha laga..ki aapko achha laga .. :)

    Chidi:

    dheere dheere wo bhi sikh jaunga :)

    Hemant:

    Thank you, Sir.

    Menachery:

    Its a lot to expect from not a mush pot like me. :D

    Sugar Cube:

    Welcome and Thank you :)

    Bindaas:

    wo sab to thik hai..par hai kaun tu? :)

    Saru:

    I adore your blog. :)

    Roy:

    saale..galti se likh gaya itna kuch..mere se..hehe :)

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